{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":false},"comments":[{"id":"66927556","dateCreated":"1396638918","smartDate":"Apr 4, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bshtok.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66927556"},"dateDigested":1531983322,"commentId":"0_1","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: reference needed","description":"reference needed","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"\u201can affective state of consciousness in which joy, sorrow, fear, hate, or the like is experienced\u2026\u201d","dateCreated":"1396638918","user":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Emotion+Essay+by+Claudia+Burton\/500631130?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"\u200d\u201can affective state of consciousness in which joy, sorrow, fear, hate, or the like is experienced\u2026\u201d","dateCreated":"1396639733","user":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Emotion+Essay+by+Claudia+Burton\/500633530?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66927722","dateCreated":"1396639733","smartDate":"Apr 4, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bshtok.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66927722"},"dateDigested":1531983322,"commentId":"500631130_4","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: This would benefit from an example of...","description":"This would benefit from an example of literature or pastry that is heavily reliant on emotion interpretation","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"<\/a>While we can recognise that emotion was not necessary in obtaining our factual knowledge in Biology, in subjects that are integrally based on interpretation, as opposed to facts, such as in English Literature, emotion is essential. <\/a>After studying English for a number of years, I have learnt that the key to being successful is to learn to how to appreciate a piece of text, while linking it into our own experiences to derive interesting thoughts that we can back up. All of this is entirely dependent on our emotion. Emotion allows us to broaden our viewpoint; allowing us to make connections with limitless amounts of knowledge that link into the experiences in our life; a skill that is essential in the fluidity and creativity demanded in writing. <\/a>It has been proven<\/a> that when studying a language, or indeed the study of a language, being in a strong emotional state can expand the range of knowledge you acquire, as it allows you to link what you are studying into tangible thoughts you know more about. As a student, I found it difficult to succeed in English, partly due to the fact that as a thinker, I am highly logistical and numerical. However, as a person, I am somewhat emotional and compassionate; the struggle I faced was allowing my personality and emotion to become my thinking, enabling me to construct writing that contained my own knowledge, and not a reworded reconstruction of the author\u2019s thoughts.","dateCreated":"1396639734","user":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Emotion+Essay+by+Claudia+Burton\/500633530?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66927720","dateCreated":"1396639733","smartDate":"Apr 4, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bshtok.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66927720"},"dateDigested":1531983322,"commentId":"500631130_1","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Largely, a good paragraph. not sure a...","description":"Largely, a good paragraph. not sure about the example though - do you have an experience when you and another person reacted differently to the results of an experiment","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"We are able to question \u201cTo what extent does emotion play in our acquisition of knowledge in different subject areas\u201d by discussing the element of emotion in a range of areas of knowledge. The influence of emotion, upon gaining knowledge in the natural sciences, for example in Biology, is limited. Technically speaking, the study of Biology is entirely based upon the ability to factually recall the processes and procedures of the grandeur of life, a realm of knowledge, which can be gained through a logical and methodical approach to learning \u2013 completely independent of emotional influence. Despite this, the need to analyze and use our intuition, leads us into an opposing direction as to whether our emotions are necessary in this area of study. From turning a set of data into a well-analyzed report, the knowledge becomes \u201cours\u201d in that we understand it and link it to our own knowledge \u201cweb\u201d. This development of understanding relies not only on our sense perception, but also upon our emotions and ability to use these emotions to lead to a logical conclusion. While the gaining of knowledge is not dependent on our emotion, our ability to process ambiguity in experiments and come to a logical conclusion is reliant upon our ability to process and understand our emotion and intuition, and what they\u2019re telling us. Studying Biology, I have found this to be true, especially during practical experiments. I recently did an experiment in which I examined the effects of pH on the ability for an enzyme solution to work, and I found difficulty when evaluating my results. What I had expected to occur, had not happened and it was only as I analyzed my method and practical skills, linking back to previous experiments, that I was able to realize what I was doing wrong, and redo my experiment, producing the \u201ccorrect\u201d results that I was expecting. In this case, without my own emotion and experience, I wouldn\u2019t have been able to recognise that what I was doing was causing fault in my results.","dateCreated":"1396639733","user":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Emotion+Essay+by+Claudia+Burton\/500633530?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66927724","dateCreated":"1396639734","smartDate":"Apr 4, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bshtok.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66927724"},"dateDigested":1531983322,"commentId":"500631130_2","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Great start","description":"Great start","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"While we can recognise that emotion was not necessary in obtaining our factual knowledge in Biology, in subjects that are integrally based on interpretation, as opposed to facts, such as in English Literature, emotion is essential.","dateCreated":"1396639734","user":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Emotion+Essay+by+Claudia+Burton\/500633530?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66927726","dateCreated":"1396639734","smartDate":"Apr 4, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bshtok.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66927726"},"dateDigested":1531983322,"commentId":"500631130_3","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: By whom exactly and when?????","description":"By whom exactly and when?????","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"It has been proven","dateCreated":"1396639735","user":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Emotion+Essay+by+Claudia+Burton\/500633530?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66927728","dateCreated":"1396639735","smartDate":"Apr 4, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bshtok.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66927728"},"dateDigested":1531983322,"commentId":"500631130_6","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Good to see you contrasting different...","description":"Good to see you contrasting different aspects of a subject","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"Unlike English Literature, that has a high demand for emotion, and Biology, which has a low demand for emotion, humanities, such as Geography, are somewhat on the borderline between factual recall and emotionally linked knowledge. The study of Geography is the study of the physical world, and the affect that our World has on the human population whom live in it. As one could assume, the physical portion of Geography is highly reliant on our ability to logistically and factually recall \u2013 completely independent of, and without the need of, our emotions. However, as we begin to link these facts into their affect on our population, our emotions are essential. Many often say that Human Geography is largely reliant on \u201ccommon sense\u201d \u2013 the study taps into our unconscious decision-making, the \u201cmode of thinking\u201d that we do \u201cwithout thinking\u201d and this is largely true. The study requires the ability to empathise with those affected by natural disasters, famine, and poverty to enable the student to come to logistical conclusions of ways to provide aid; this couldn\u2019t be done without the underlying knowledge provided though our emotional experiences. A particular topic that I enjoy in Geography is disparities, and how we can improve them through the introduction of aid. As a student, I use my emotion to derive new knowledge from existing knowledge and case studies that allows me not to <\/a>deject<\/a> any information that doesn\u2019t necessarily directly relate. For example, a programme developed in Uganda, entitled \u201cSend a Cow\u201d helps families to better their economic income and food growth by supplying them with farm animals. Despite there being obvious impacts associated with breeding cows, there also comes the positive of the independence that such a set up provides women with \u2013 they are no longer tied down to their husband\u2019s farms and can get an education, which can then decrease their desire to have children at an early age, and can therefore decrease infant mortality rates. I found that my ability to link such a broad range of concepts came from making the knowledge my own, through my emotions, which enabled me to link my knowledge into schemas that I am able to directly recount from.","dateCreated":"1396639736","user":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Emotion+Essay+by+Claudia+Burton\/500633530?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66927732","dateCreated":"1396639736","smartDate":"Apr 4, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bshtok.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66927732"},"dateDigested":1531983322,"commentId":"500631130_7","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Needs a bit of further explanation. A...","description":"Needs a bit of further explanation. Also, what about when we can empathize and relate to knowledge. Is it now ours on a deeper level?","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"My response, as a student, is no. An ability to factually recall can only get you part of the way, especially in an examination scenario; it is the follow through of connecting these facts into a broader range that allows you to successfully be an owner of knowledge.","dateCreated":"1396639737","user":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Emotion+Essay+by+Claudia+Burton\/500633530?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66927730","dateCreated":"1396639736","smartDate":"Apr 4, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bshtok.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66927730"},"dateDigested":1531983322,"commentId":"500631130_5","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: you mean 'reject'?","description":"you mean 'reject'?","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"deject","dateCreated":"1396639736","user":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Emotion+Essay+by+Claudia+Burton\/500633530?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66927734","dateCreated":"1396639737","smartDate":"Apr 4, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bshtok.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66927734"},"dateDigested":1531983322,"commentId":"500631130_8","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: delete","description":"delete","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"From this essay, I have been enabled to understand the significant impact that.","dateCreated":"1396639737","user":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Emotion+Essay+by+Claudia+Burton\/500633530?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66927736","dateCreated":"1396639737","smartDate":"Apr 4, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bshtok.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66927736"},"dateDigested":1531983322,"commentId":"500631130_9","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: You don't really deal with this aspec...","description":"You don't really deal with this aspect of the quote in the essay.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"felt the force of the knowledge","dateCreated":"1396639738","user":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Emotion+Essay+by+Claudia+Burton\/500633530?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66927738","dateCreated":"1396639738","smartDate":"Apr 4, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bshtok.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66927738"},"dateDigested":1531983323,"commentId":"500631130_10","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Overall,m a very good attempt at answ...","description":"Overall,m a very good attempt at answering the question. to further improve the answer needs more real world examples to support its analysis and more focus on the quote throughout, particularly the 'full force' part.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":".","dateCreated":"1396639739","user":{"username":"MrCNewman","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MrCNewman","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369498615\/MrCNewman-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Emotion+Essay+by+Claudia+Burton\/500633530?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}